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Found this beautiful lady on Instagram and I decided to use her as my muse for practice. This caricature wasn't too out there but I still think its considered a caricature.
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Hey! I assume this is the one you wanted a comment on. Firstly, wow! This one shows a huge improvement. The face is really lovely from every little detail. I love the crooked smile and mischievous eyes. Very attractive. Colours are unified and lovely as well.
The light source, anatomy, and focus are inconsistent. The right top of her head is squished. Light ends of her hair are in strong focus, even more than her face. The shadow along her shirt makes it look like the light is shining from the ground, yet her face and hair are lit up as if there is a light from the top. BUT!
BUT! It doesn't necessarily mean that you need to make adjustments. I don't believe that the most accurate representation is what art is all about. Many artists I like are not realists. These things I mentioned above makes this piece looks like I'm drunk for the lack of better word. Or maybe dizzy. The fact that your anatomy is not accurate gives a funky feel, and incorrect focus gives that drunk feel, like I'm dizzy looking at her. So in a way, it represents that her appeal being so strong that I can't even focus.
So in short, if you want to go for more realism, I'd fix these things. But it has a great appeal because of these inconsistencies.
Good job!!!!
Blue
The light source, anatomy, and focus are inconsistent. The right top of her head is squished. Light ends of her hair are in strong focus, even more than her face. The shadow along her shirt makes it look like the light is shining from the ground, yet her face and hair are lit up as if there is a light from the top. BUT!
BUT! It doesn't necessarily mean that you need to make adjustments. I don't believe that the most accurate representation is what art is all about. Many artists I like are not realists. These things I mentioned above makes this piece looks like I'm drunk for the lack of better word. Or maybe dizzy. The fact that your anatomy is not accurate gives a funky feel, and incorrect focus gives that drunk feel, like I'm dizzy looking at her. So in a way, it represents that her appeal being so strong that I can't even focus.
So in short, if you want to go for more realism, I'd fix these things. But it has a great appeal because of these inconsistencies.
Good job!!!!
Blue